Saturday, May 30, 2026

HE IS DECONSTRUCTING HIS HEART


I was sat in a hotel bar in Plymouth a couple of years ago and this poem wrote itself.

THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY


A Friday night hotel bar

he’s a couple or three drinks ahead of me

his every word is big voiced into his phone


he is deconstructing his heart


I’m the other side of a flimsy partition

trying to camouflage my listening ear


I can’t pull out pen and paper

to record his every heartfelt word


Can I?


The poem wags a finger in my face

Whispers: this one’s not going to happen


Yes, it is true. I did not need to do much in the way of revising, once in a while they just happen.

Here's Anna Terheim with Shoreline.

Until next time.

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HE IS DECONSTRUCTING HIS HEART

I was sat in a hotel bar in Plymouth a couple of years ago and this poem wrote itself. THE ONE THAT GOT AWAY A Friday night hotel bar ...