I read a lot of science fiction, not as much as I did when I was younger, but enough. This poem is an oddity, I think it works but I also think it needs to be part of a sequence. I haven't written that sequence yet.
extract from The Song of the Variable-Sweep Wings
the silence of the great extinction
settled on the shoulders of the survivors
as if for the first time
they could see all that had been lost
and so set to refashion their world
shipping in from beyond the stars
mechanical birds to jewel their skies
and fill a space long vacated
by sinew and bone
feather and wing
having captured the thermal
see how their propellers idle
as they spiral ever higher
to spectrograph heaven with their metal tongues
I like the epic nature of the poem, the feeling that the world will persist whatever we do. I know it will but these days I wonder if we will manage to persevere.
Here's another track off Maya de Vitry's new album.
Until next time.
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