Tuesday, June 2, 2026

THE WATER CYCLE

I am of an age [very late 60s] to remember having to copy the teacher's drawings from the board into our exercise books. One of the one's that stays with me is of the water cycle. Education was by rote in those days.

THE WATER CYCLE


on his drawing the rain fell up

he did not give a fuck

for the teacher’s laboured explanation

or his laborious chalked illustration

they were forced copy

he simply had a need to see

the world as a place of wonder

where water could soar skywards


The [poem arrived complete. I like the way it does not take itself seriously. Although the end draws on the narrator's imagination. Thanks to Alison Wilson once again for the illustration. It's taken from The Wait Of Water, my latest collection.

I have been a fan of The Decemberists from the get go. 

Until next time.  

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